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Review Detail of ekatn in Just My Luck-(rewrite)

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ekatn
ekatnLv49mthekatn

It's not bad, it has the chance to be a good novel.................................... because 140 characters are requested, how annoying..................................

Just My Luck-(rewrite)

Lucinziel66

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Lucinziel66
Lucinziel66AuteurLucinziel66

thank you for the review ☺️

Lazy_S_reader
Lazy_S_readerLv4Lazy_S_reader

I like the old one better [img=Cries]But still, this one has a good potential [img=Smitten]

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

"small harem" with world travel between One Piece and DxD? impossible xD.

Lucinziel66:thank you for the review ☺️
Lucinziel66
Lucinziel66AuteurLucinziel66

i am the impossible

Ryofu:"small harem" with world travel between One Piece and DxD? impossible xD.
Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

I don't mean impossible to write, but impossible to folow. There are too many good women in those two world that any "small" Harem will feel incomplete and will end up being a disapointment xD.

Lucinziel66:i am the impossible