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SimplyNovel
SimplyNovelLv41yrSimplyNovel

I was honestly going to wait a little more before writing a review, but the cry babies with those 1 star reviews forced my hand. The story starts in the hunter exam arc like most HxH fanfics, however the author skims through this arc pretty fast which I liked. The Mc ends up going to heavens arena but does not spend a lot of time with gon and killua. The Mc is his own character, not just someone following gon and reliving the canon. The interactions between characters need a little more work but is still good enough. His hatsu is pretty op and would have probably made him stronger than the ant king by the time the chimera arc starts, which was why it needed a small nerf (chapter 20). He is still very op and will likely surpass netero in the future, so no issues there. Updates have been stable up till now so give it a try, it's better than 99% of HxH fanfics.

HxH: adventure of a lifetime

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khanderblander
khanderblanderLv3khanderblander

pequeño nerf ? Mutilacion del ojo pierde un articulo OP que le llevo 3 meses sin elegir nada pierde una habilidad vital que amplio su EN (spider sens) se amplia el tiempo de utilizacion de 1 semana a 1 mes se cambia de 3 eleciones a 2 se realiza un contrato abierto para que el mercader lo modifique lo que llamas pequeño nerf yo lo llamo amputacion

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11hero4hire

i think that could've been tastefully in so many way instead of merchant punishing him physically and taking away his power treating mc like a slave to his own nen. some nice way were: #Merchant power was overdrawn and need 1 year to recover, ##merchant now need 1 month to reappear since it broken the world law ###since mc cheated merchant seal the power of kamui into basic sharingan and mc to train and open it step by step etc...

khanderblander
khanderblanderLv3khanderblander

totalmente de acuerdo o simplemente la cantidad de NEN que se necesita para habilidades de otro mundo se triplica y un monton de otras cosas , pero ya ves

hero4hire:i think that could've been tastefully in so many way instead of merchant punishing him physically and taking away his power treating mc like a slave to his own nen. some nice way were: #Merchant power was overdrawn and need 1 year to recover, ##merchant now need 1 month to reappear since it broken the world law ###since mc cheated merchant seal the power of kamui into basic sharingan and mc to train and open it step by step etc...