The story was interesting. It reminds me of my all time favorite Chibi and Armor Brotherhood, if you know what I'm saying. Hahaha. Anyway, the writing style and quality is good but it gets a little bit confusing when it gets to dialogue. Only a little okay? The story development wasn't there yet but it's actually nice that the author takes his time to give development to the two MCs. The world background or the world setting of the story give me quite a surprise. It's quite different from what I initially thought when I saw the book cover and when I read the synopsis. Overall this book has so much potential.

I randomly bumped into this novel, it's great and the characters are memorable and I grew attachment with each of them. It is as if they are real. Great work author

I like that the book is mostly dialogue driven to keep the plot moving forward. The closeness of the two main characters is more friendship than brotherly; which I believe is a stronger bond (chosen family and all). I also love the differences in their personalities with one being more happy go lucky and the other the worrier. Good book thus far.

The primary characters in this novel are emotional. The world and issues they face make this book worth reading. I love Micah and Peter's closeness. Due to the rare two major characters, the plot is intriguing. The plot progresses well, but not too fast. Overall, the author writes well and has promise.

The main characters in this story are written to be packed with emotion, the world they inhabit and the conflicts they face are well worth giving this book a read!

Loving the brotherhood bond between Micah and Peter. The plot is interesting since rare is the times when we see two protagonist. Plot progression/pacing is good not too fast. Overall huge amount of potential and the author's writing is also good

The author's ability to draw me in with just one chapter speaks volumes about their storytelling prowess, and I'm genuinely excited to embark on this literary journey. Keep it up.

I think one of you're strengths of this novel is its well-developed characters. But The pacing of the novel is a concern. While there are moments of action, they are often overshadowed by long stretches of exposition and unnecessary details. This imbalance hampers the flow of the story and makes it difficult to maintain interest. Also the writing style could benefit from further refinement. The prose is often clunky and lacks finesse, hindering the overall reading experience.try to fix that

Hi so I just found this on reddit and I got to say this is pretty good! the characters are great especially how you handle the dialogue and the premise and plot is interesting enough to keep me to invested. Oh and if you have time I was hoping if you could critique my webnovel Deadmen Manhattan. You don't have to if you don't want to, you can ignore this if you want. I just want to know your thoughts that's all.