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Mostly everything is top tier in this book. women mc plotline themes world building. Fleshing out characters are a problem. And letting the story arcs also have that to me. Feels like it's just too fast. Maybe that's just my experience. I don't know. I'm open to being wrong. I just like being honest. The only problem is after a while. The women in the harem are looking a little similar to me. So far the angle is meet overpowered sexy woman. Dominate her slowly. I want to see a woman who can actually change our mc. In regards to tension there is none. Because he has a whole life of unknown experience to draw from. The opponents women or battle aren't that hard. With the pacing it feels like it would take 2000 chapters to completely flesh out the story and progress and level up the mc from the inside. These are honest and blunt thoughts. Shout Out to a banger novel. Much love.

Debauchery of a Soul-Eating Wraith

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Thanks for the Review,🙌