Review Detail of Omny1928 in Exiled Saviour
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It has good potential the grammar is good not the best but it will improve more with experience. I can’t really say much about the plot because of the small amount of chapters but from what i read if it’s pulled off well it’ll be good. In my opinion you have to be more expressive in your writing unless you want the dreary feel of AoT but you’ll have to have characters that people are attached to die for me to feel depressed. I felt this was a really long 10 chapters but it’s probably because I was doing some light research on fighting styles of the weapons you picked. Ps: I know you probably won’t use this fighting style for the spear guy was his name Alex? But if you want to see a technique I found for Spear/Sword dual wielding search up Sword & Spear Dual Wielding by robinswords (it’s a YouTube shorts)
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Less of a axe and like it’s name suggests a big hook Im guessing here but you could probably use it to pull down a shield and stab or be a team player and make openings for your teammates to attack
Omny1928:I’m getting really hooked into looking in to alternatives to the standers spear I most likely will never see a book Mc ever using this weapon but a Billhook. A halberd that is pretty much rearranged with different pros and cons to the regular halberdimage