Review Detail of Unknown_Router in Reborn as a Half-Dragon Kin

Hey, author here. I just wanted my readers to give some feedback and see what they think about the book so far. As this is my first attempt at a novel I would like some opinions about what I could do better:). Also please let me know if you would like to be included in the Novel and if so include a first and last name as well as a race from the Synopsis, whether or not you want to be good or evil as well.