Review Detail of LuRai in The Novel's Villainics.

Writing Quality: So loved the plotline, grammar, misuse of past and present tense, and wording errors, as well as sentence structure needs some work. I love the story development I just feel it's moving very fast in the beginning, and a few details are missing that could help clear a lot of confusion. I do however think this would make an amazing webcomic as is! Great job keep up the good work.