Review Detail of ZaHagag in In the Novel World

Well To start with the writing quality isn’t too bad, but there are a lot of minor mistakes and mixing up past and present tense in the same sentence. I have read till ch 17 in one go so I am not going to comment on update stability. The story development is quite strange I felt like the past 13 chapters I have read were meaningless as the mc has forgotten them and not to mention that starting a story with ntr is not that favourable in the short term. Onto character design The mc feels very unstable and and the rest of the characters feel empty and there was even an instance where the author named the characters boy 1 and boy2. I won’t comment on the world background as I have only read 17 chapters. Overall It’s an okay read