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Review Detail of Aerian in Celebrity System In The DC Universe

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Aerian
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Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.

Celebrity System In The DC Universe

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Out of all the reviews on my story so far, I think this is the most fair and accurate. I appreciate the review. I plan to make another Celebrity story in the future similar to this one and I will take this review into consideration when I write it. I'll try to do less singing and try to make my characters more flesh and blood.

Aerian
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this is the most important by far don't give your mc Vegeta's hairline

Level1Goblin:Out of all the reviews on my story so far, I think this is the most fair and accurate. I appreciate the review. I plan to make another Celebrity story in the future similar to this one and I will take this review into consideration when I write it. I'll try to do less singing and try to make my characters more flesh and blood.