Shameless review here by author, but this is my hope for the future of my novel. The book was originally a wish-fulfillment idea that I had, but I wanted to not make it pure wish fulfillment. I'll update with a fixed schedule and welcome any and all comments, provided they aren't disrespectful to me, the author, or the readers who might or might not enjoy the book. Give it a try, let me know if you like it, or if you don't, so I can improve it.
Legaro
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COMMEI'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.
Helios_Sol:please don't have him becoming a slave to the devils
accepting the evil piece means becoming a slave it doesn't matter how the Gremory treat their servants , from an outsider point of view he is a slave no need to sugarcoat it
Legaro:I'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.
Legaro:I'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.
It could be seen both ways, but I do see what you mean. I might have him not accept the evil piece, but it will change my plans.
ThreshGasm:accepting the evil piece means becoming a slave it doesn't matter how the Gremory treat their servants , from an outsider point of view he is a slave no need to sugarcoat it
Helios_Sol:the peerage system is slavery no matter how it's looked at or used it's still slavery
Hahaha, you took the words right out of my mouth. That's what I was planning, but it was supposed to be a surprise, kinda. oh well. 😅
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Legaro:Hahaha, you took the words right out of my mouth. That's what I was planning, but it was supposed to be a surprise, kinda. oh well. 😅
1. It came to my mind one day when I was coming up with names. I'm not sure how, but I liked how it sounded. 2. No Yuri. I'm not a fan of Yuri in a Harem.
FinnsRevenge:2 questions; Why name the mc Sharon? is there any yuri?
Just odd to me for a male mc to use a feminine name like Sharon. Glad to hear there's no yuri, good taste
Legaro:1. It came to my mind one day when I was coming up with names. I'm not sure how, but I liked how it sounded. 2. No Yuri. I'm not a fan of Yuri in a Harem.
Thank you. And yeah, the name apparently did sound odd to some others too, but I had no idea, but it's alright. I personally like the name. If it doesn't feel right, you can always just swap it to another name. It won't do much to the story.
FinnsRevenge:Just odd to me for a male mc to use a feminine name like Sharon. Glad to hear there's no yuri, good taste