Review Detail of Leonholdt in Goddess Wives x Eternal Dungeon

Admittedly, im about 60 chapters or so in. while some improvement was made as it went, I can't justify a higher rating at this time. almost every conversation or thought process, the MC has feels like the vomited words of a crack addict that can not string to thoughts together, and it makes it difficult to follow the story. ill update this in a few weeks when I can justify to myself coming back to read more.overall, the story has potential, but things are hardly fleshed out or feel incredibly forced with no rhyme or reason. I'd love to see it edited and fixed to actually give it a proper review, but I doubt that will happen