Review Detail of HambinoRanx in The Dark Lord's Myriad of Death

I love reading this first chapter and I have to say this Author has a strong way with words. Everything is so finely detailed it’ as if the writer is inside the very rooms they are describing, it’s as if I’m looking into a mirror seeing these faces and struggles they deal with The story pacing is good but feel it could be driven a bit faster but that’ a personal preference r and I am enjoying the ride and can’t wait to pick up chapter 2 and 3.