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AdamFlores
AdamFloresLv42mthAdamFlores

I appreciate this story. DDLC stories are not only rare, but the main characters of these stories are either obsessed with saving the girls, or they are shy and meek and always get led around Monika. So it is quite refreshing to see a story like this with a MC that actively flirts with the girls and isn't a stuttering virgin. The premise is also great, not being restricted to the DDLC universe and having the potential ability to travel to other game worlds... Well, it is certainly great that this is a harem, because let's be honest, having access to a multitude of universe and not taking advantage of that and forming a harem would just be... stupid. The only thing I hope for is for the characters to actually have romantic development, and not just get collected by the MC like pokemon. But this is something that until now, hasn't been a problem, and I can see that the author is certainly not going down this path, so there is no need to be worried about this aspect The only complain I have is the update stability. Writing fiction is hard, I would know, but it's a bit frustrating to have a chapter every two days, and then suddenly, weeks pass without a single chapter. Author, my advice to you would be to upload a chapter a week. It would allow you to have a more stable schedule, and it would also give you more time to write, or review chapters. You can tweak it around as you see fit, but if you can't write consistently, just keep some chapters in stock, and hold on to them, just in case. I don't know your situation, do with that advice as you'd like, but always remember that having a stable update schedule is important. Of course, it is your own work, so no pressure here, I just hope helps you, as I certainly want to read more of this story that you have created

Stuck In The Cyberverse

No_Existence

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No_Existence
No_ExistenceAuteurNo_Existence

Thanks man, your review is stellar for this site. As for the updates, I know it is a problem. And I'm using the relatively small amount of chapters and pre boost in visibility that occur around 30 chapters to get away with it. as for your advice, I guess I could publish 1 chapter a week. But 1500 words per week isn't gotta cut it in any case, so i'd need to change that for it to work. Also, in my weeks of radio silence, I'm still writing occasionally. The chapters once every two days was me publishing my stock of them 💀. In the end, the problem lays in how often I write. It take me at least two sessions of one hour to write a chapter, and that's when I have my pencil on fire and my neurons activated. But between Juggling school, work, friends and hobbies, it is precarious. Since I don't write when feeling like shit and have something more pressing to do. So for now, it is what it is. Maybe I'll work something out with longer chapters less often. We'll see. At least for now, rejoice in knowing this fanfic is not likely to go on hiatus anytime soon.

AdamFlores
AdamFloresLv4AdamFlores

That's good man, I completely understand as I have the same problem, as many author do too, I believe. Being in a bad state of mind certainly takes the joy out of writing, in that case, it would be better to wait until you are in a better mood to write. Having the motivation, inspiration and time to write good quality content is difficult, and it also very hard to come into this state often when taking into account real life responsibilities into account But hey, it is indeed better to have an unstable upload schedule than to give up on this fic. And I also would prefer for you to upload chapters randomly if it means that this fan fiction won't come under hiatus... This work is certainly a gem, so I won't object to something like that By the way, your reply got shadow banned. That's why it took a while for me to notice that you replied to this review

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