It's a great story, really well written and with correct grammar.But the updates have stopped for a while now.I liked the plot so far.In my opinion though, this intro sequence as been going on for a bit to long.I want to see the new jerry tackle the world.I hope i can see it at least after the first 10 chapters.
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