Review Detail of Pomu in THE DEFIANT

The story has an interesting premise, drawing readers in with questions about the protagonist's identity and purpose. The writing style and chapters effectively build quite a decent suspense and intrigue, gradually revealing more about the protag' as the story goes on. Overall I'm giving it a 5/5 for now, it has promise and successfully creates an atmosphere of mystery and intrigue. If the author manages to expand on world-building and character development, it has immense potential! Keep writing!