Review Detail of Goddess_Luna01 in Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love

Overall, this book is great and filled with potential. I personally like the book. although, my review might come off as odd, but it's just a few suggestions. I think you jumped from 3rd POV to 1st POV a few times. also, a few minor errors(typos, i guess).those aside, I like the book and I'm gonna follow it. Kudos, author!