Review Detail of KingsCandidate in The Golem Mage
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This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned. A few examples: - Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it - In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER - MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened
The Golem Mage
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Typically, I wouldn't bother responding, but as my most vocal critic, I feel compelled to address your comments. I'm currently in the process of revising my book from the beginning. And to date, I've reworked 56 chapters, the progress may seem slow, but balancing my writing, editing my flaws, maintaining a rapid update schedule, and with other life commitments means that it's not easy. Furthermore, you've voiced numerous criticisms of my work. If you believe you can do better, I encourage you to write your own book—one that's free of the issues you've pointed out. When I began writing, my grammar was far from perfect, but I've made significant strides since then. And I'm continuously working to rectify past errors. It's impractical to justify my writing style to every critic who dislikes it, I'm focused on improving the quality of my writing for those who read on. It's unrealistic to expect every one to like my book ; even Jesus wasn't loved by everyone. So, be aware I certainly don't aim to please every reader. 😎💁 While I don't know you personally, your comments suggest that you take pleasure in disparaging my work. Frankly, I'm indifferent to your trolling. 😂😅 It's rather amusing that you've read so far into the book despite your complaints. If my writing truly displeases you, you're free to stop reading. Gracias! [img=recommend]
KingsCandidate:If you see all the comments on your book begging for you to edit and fix it and you don’t you’re a terrible author 🤷♂️ Also if I didn’t give the book a fair chance then I would have no right to make a review right? 🧐 Finally you have said nothing in regards to the examples I’ve given since you know they’re true. I’m glad you take inspiration from the hate, I hope you can actually make a good novel with it. 🙏
Says someone who has committed himself to criticising the book from the very first time you read it, I saw your comments, was just too lazy to even reply, just know I didn't drag you or force you to read it at all, Funny thing is you might still even sneakily still continue reading cause believe me almost every one who dropped comments like this and where so eager to comment on ever chapter with criticism are still reading🤣, I don't vote myself right? So see you later.+++ your criticism motivates me.
If you see all the comments on your book begging for you to edit and fix it and you don’t you’re a terrible author 🤷♂️ Also if I didn’t give the book a fair chance then I would have no right to make a review right? 🧐 Finally you have said nothing in regards to the examples I’ve given since you know they’re true. I’m glad you take inspiration from the hate, I hope you can actually make a good novel with it. 🙏
mystic_dark_100:Says someone who has committed himself to criticising the book from the very first time you read it, I saw your comments, was just too lazy to even reply, just know I didn't drag you or force you to read it at all, Funny thing is you might still even sneakily still continue reading cause believe me almost every one who dropped comments like this and where so eager to comment on ever chapter with criticism are still reading🤣, I don't vote myself right? So see you later.+++ your criticism motivates me.
I’m glad to hear that you’ve decided to start revising this novel as making it readable will definitely give it the opportunity to shine the way that you envision it. Also I am currently in the process of writing my own novel and I hope that you’ll read it and give me your honest review when it is released as well. That being said although I can understand how you’re probably feeling based off getting a bad review you seem to be missing my point. You like to bring up how much of your novel I have read to which I’ve already responded that without doing so I’d really have no right to leave a review on your work. However, I’m not a free reader, I have paid for this novel. If you truly believe that someone leaving an honest review of your work is them “trolling” then you are going to have a lot of trouble when it comes to retaining readers. I’m sure it’s difficult to have something that you’ve worked on get criticized, however, when the majority of readers and reviews go over the same point then maybe it deserves a second look. For future reference a lot of Authors will give “self reviews” when important updates are coming not just for new readers to know but also to inform current readers. To expect people to sludge through until your most recent chapters to maybe get an update from you that this novel is getting revised is foolish. It’s not about making sure all readers like your novel, it’s about showing the readers who spend money on your novel that you appreciate their patronage and input. I wish you the best of luck on your novel.
mystic_dark_100:Typically, I wouldn't bother responding, but as my most vocal critic, I feel compelled to address your comments. I'm currently in the process of revising my book from the beginning. And to date, I've reworked 56 chapters, the progress may seem slow, but balancing my writing, editing my flaws, maintaining a rapid update schedule, and with other life commitments means that it's not easy. Furthermore, you've voiced numerous criticisms of my work. If you believe you can do better, I encourage you to write your own book—one that's free of the issues you've pointed out. When I began writing, my grammar was far from perfect, but I've made significant strides since then. And I'm continuously working to rectify past errors. It's impractical to justify my writing style to every critic who dislikes it, I'm focused on improving the quality of my writing for those who read on. It's unrealistic to expect every one to like my book ; even Jesus wasn't loved by everyone. So, be aware I certainly don't aim to please every reader. 😎💁 While I don't know you personally, your comments suggest that you take pleasure in disparaging my work. Frankly, I'm indifferent to your trolling. 😂😅 It's rather amusing that you've read so far into the book despite your complaints. If my writing truly displeases you, you're free to stop reading. Gracias! [img=recommend]