I'd say it's a nice story, but it could use some work. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but aside from that, the story is well put together, and I really appreciate the effort you put into it. Good luck and wising you the best👍🏻
THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
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COMMETHE_GOAT_HIMSELF:thanks bro anfld if you don't mind could you point out the mistake you dee
It's nothing major; I just think you need to work on your grammar fluency a little more, and I recommend using grammarly.
THE_GOAT_HIMSELF:thanks bro anfld if you don't mind could you point out the mistake you dee
g_d:It's nothing major; I just think you need to work on your grammar fluency a little more, and I recommend using grammarly.
I really want to help, but I'm not sure how. I believe you can ask someone around you to help proofread. If you need any help, I will happy to assist you.
THE_GOAT_HIMSELF:thats what I've been using 😭😭😭
g_d:I really want to help, but I'm not sure how. I believe you can ask someone around you to help proofread. If you need any help, I will happy to assist you.
g_d:Sorry I couldn't be of much help; I know you've got this. Good luck!