Review Detail of WhiteDeath16 in An Unordinary Extra

Item: An Unordinary Extra
Rating: 5

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WhiteDeath16Auteur9mthWhiteDeath16

Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars. I would love any feedback you guys can give as this is my first real original novel. Also, feel free to ask any questions about the story here!

An Unordinary Extra

WhiteDeath16

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Ijekiel_PendragonLv4Ijekiel_Pendragon

You have wonderful narrative skills. Thank you for writing🫰👌😗❤️

3mth

Kotik_KotikLv5Kotik_Kotik

can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique

9mth

WhiteDeath16AuteurWhiteDeath16

Sure, I'll try to make it better. Thanks for your feedback!

Kotik_Kotik:can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique

9mth

_07_JaiprakashpLv13_07_Jaiprakashp

it's cliche but has its own uniqueness also to fully decide to support you should release more chapters and don't drop it because its nice.

9mth

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

8mth

WhiteDeath16AuteurWhiteDeath16

Only one in the end.

Ashborn1609:I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

8mth

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

WhiteDeath16:Only one in the end.

8mth

ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

academy arc?

4mth

Hardy1jLv14Hardy1j

Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho

ItzNeedless:academy arc?

3mth

ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

Yeah, its academy. I read it already.

Hardy1j:Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho

3mth

Hardy1jLv14Hardy1j

Oh Alr Tq

ItzNeedless:Yeah, its academy. I read it already.

3mth

FaierLv14Faier

why change it after so many chapters 😭😭

WhiteDeath16:Only one in the end.

3mth

WhiteDeath16AuteurWhiteDeath16

Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.

Faier:why change it after so many chapters 😭😭

2mth

FaierLv14Faier

well thats unfortunate but you should announce it in my opinion at the end of one chapter for the readers that dont bear reading harem 😕

WhiteDeath16:Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.

2mth

FaierLv14Faier

no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem

Ashborn1609:I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

2mth

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

thanks again for saving me from wasting my time.🙂 now I can do better things like reading no-harem book .

Faier:no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem
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2mth

FaierLv14Faier

Ashborn1609:thanks again for saving me from wasting my time.🙂 now I can do better things like reading no-harem book .

2mth

Hardy1jLv14Hardy1j

Thanks! That saves me the time!

Faier:no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem
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2mth

Pedro_SousaLv15Pedro_Sousa

So it will be harem path/ending? *hopefully*

WhiteDeath16:Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.

2mth