Review Detail of Ayries_Jesea in In The World Of : In Another World With My Smartphone

Item: In The World Of : In Another World With My Smartphone
Rating: 3

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Ayries_JeseaLv41yrAyries_Jesea

Kinda bland, the mc has no real impact with the story and just let it go with the flow, although he does have some influence being one of the richest and famous person in the world. Good enough to pass time but don't expect much for a plot. Just an advice or just suggestions for the author, if you won't change much on the plot, or you won't add something I advised you to turn the story into multiverse travel so his abilities wont go to waste. Cause as of now, the mc is doing nothing at all and has no real danger and everything is just going with the original flow

In The World Of : In Another World With My Smartphone

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N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

No harem, a MC without the balls to do something or get powerful ? No thank you ! . Thanks mate , for the warning in such a untasteful story.... just with the "No harem" it's enough to make the story many times worse but with a MC who does nothing .. then this is not a story but random words.

1yr

Ayries_JeseaLv4Ayries_Jesea

I won't say cowardly, but just to lazy to change anything that is already going to be alright. The mc also doesn't hide anything, and won't let anyone insult him without consequences. He was also stronger than Touya, but yeah nothing really change and it feels like he was just there too add background to the world. Touya also has his original harem members, except for one that was replaced by an OC cause the mc ended falling to that one. But yeah, nothing really change and the MC is just there to add some background to the world although most POV is centered on him

1yr