Review Detail of Sinbau in A Lesser Evil: Cyber Mercenaries

This story has the potential ngl, I think- add more to the world-building to create a hook. And add more to the characters surrounding the MC if you want to keep the MC's appearance mysterious to reveal later on in the story. I like the writing style author! But for scenes, you want to make a more ominous switch up the narration style! Other than that I think it's well done! Keep it up, author!