Review Detail of RomanceFanatic028 in Greece: From Kingdom To Empire

The book has potential but something is missing. For example, your writing needs little work. You are writing in 3rd person pov but there are lot of fourth wall breaking. Instead of saying the mc’s name you are writing protagonist. I don’t know why but it is very weird. I am not going to be too harsh as only 1 chapter is released. Maybe I’ll review again after you upload more chapter.