Review Detail of the_learningwriter in System: Vampire Bloodline - The Vampire's True Desires

I totally loved reading this✨. There’s not much to say since the book is only just starting but it was a really good read. Although I feel like the beginning is a little distracting. What I mean is that there were a lot of information, that could have been added bit by bit later on, that you explained at the beginning. And it’s not bad in itself, but I believe that when writing on apps like this, it’s important to make the beginning as catchy and attention-grabbing as possible. In all, it became more interesting towards the end of the chapter, I loved it and I’m looking forward to reading more chapters.❤️