Review Detail of Avidfan in Omnipotence: Beloved Child of Chaos.
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The synopsis may not tells it but this is a system fantasy story. The MC gains a system chaos at the very start and he is slowly knowing its use. In the first few chapters, readers can to experience what the MC is thinking, which is good. There is world building and MC build up, the grammer is almost perfect too, unlike many of the bad translations and originals around here. Hope this story will get the the support it deserves to do well.
Omnipotence: Beloved Child of Chaos.
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Thank you so much. I will put your suggestion into consideration and find a more descriptive synopsis. You may not have realized while reading but I am making changes from the first chapters going forward. I plan to reenforce the system so it is always active in his daily life, something I forgot. Thanks.[img=recommend]