It's actually decent, but a few tips to help you, first, as you are doing a SI, the one rule you must follpw, is to never, ever, make your oc tell their secret of being a reincarnator. That's a huge red flag, second don't do Diologue like this. Nathan: something something. Do it like, Nathan said, "Yada yada" or something similair but never like if it were a script instead of a story. And finally, when you write the character, try to not only write them as the age they are when you write them, but also try to write them as hoe they acted in the show. But overall I like it so far.
ParadiseHeights
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COMMEParadiseHeights:No, I don’t like harem stories, plus it too much writing and POV’s. and this is also my first story and emotions are hard to write I to words.
Infinite_Shadow_57:Oh, did the author do the 2 taboos of writing a fanfic?
No, I don’t like harem stories, plus it too much writing and POV’s. and this is also my first story and emotions are hard to write I to words.
hizer0778:is is harem? (hopefully its not)
They are not really rules. It's just most authors do them so horribly that most people prefer it just not being done at all. The 2 unwritten "Suggestions" of reincarnation fanfics are as follows. 1: Don't have your main character tell anyone they are reincarnated. 2: Don't have your main character tell anyone they are part of a fictional universe.
s_b8099:What are those ?
ParadiseHeights:No, I don’t like harem stories, plus it too much writing and POV’s. and this is also my first story and emotions are hard to write I to words.
ParadiseHeights:No, I don’t like harem stories, plus it too much writing and POV’s. and this is also my first story and emotions are hard to write I to words.