Review Detail of PRO_GAMER_2345 in I'm A Frickin Philosopher's Stone?!!

Nice work I would say. Though your writing style is a bit amateurishly and has potential to improve, it is still hooking enough. Read four chapters so far and would say that you need to put some more attention to character details and world background. Explain it a little because as you have kept it until now, interest would be lost early due to vagueness and uncertainty. Other than that, like the pirate style you imposed in it, I hope you continue on writing and improve your work.