Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in Charting the Unknown: Navigating Destiny's Uncharted Waters

I'm telling you, underrated authors like this produce the best masterpieces(one that came out of the water was 'Florida man'). I like your plot and your characters. The story is developing a little rough, but I'm betting that it will smooth out over time. Otherwise, you know what you're doing, author, I have nothing left to say :)