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Review Detail of The_little_boy in Awakening of the Crimson Guardian

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The_little_boy
The_little_boyLv31yrThe_little_boy

This novel is great. Probably one of the best I have read which contains good grammar and less mistakes. in fact, I never saw any mistakes during my reading. Because of that, i was able to quickly get involved in the story from my own perspective.... The only problem I have with the book is the descriptions. In short, I think the writer should make the descriptions less. Instead of writing a long list of personal attributes as description, the author can try to make it more readable by incorporating it with other scenes

Awakening of the Crimson Guardian

Darkswan

Liked it!

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Darkswan
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Thank you and I will work on that.