I really like the concept but the story is too fast paced. There should be some time to go into detail about what is happening more world building. For example the MC has gotten a lot of high tier ablities but hardly uses them or when he does use them the entire scene is only a couple sentences long. It also seems like the MC is being powered-up too quickly, he has gotten to very powerful legacies in the first 15 chapters but there was almost no trials to get the legacies and all that comes with them.
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COMMEYes, you know my writing problem since you one of my first readers but I can proudly say that people find my work interesting, in a good or bad way?, I'm not sure xD
Sks_Nightfox:All their novels are like this super fast paced but I like it for some reason. I better then having a 70 chapter arc on a zither competition. Am I right?