Review Detail of ScribeOfTheDamned in Ichor Genos

Shameless author here... Hehe, as you may already know that this is my first novel so i hope you all don't roast me too much for this but positive criticism is appreciated. Please do tell me about any grammatical errors so I can correct them. So now about the novel, It will be a slow burn at first but as I get accustomed to writing, it will get better. I have a general direction for the novel, and I have many creative ideas for the novel which may or may not be included. And last of all I can promise you that I can deliver you a great novel..🧐👋🏻