Review Detail of Nick1324 in I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out