Its good but the author rants too much. Way too much uneccessary writing like stop drifting. Your putting too much info it makes people stop trying to read that part and skip till you actually write something important. Storyline is great just stop with the info. And you repeat things too much, other then that its great.
Zoo of Darwin
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