Review Detail of TheWorthyOne in Cloning system in another world
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Bro, there is a google adon named Grammarly: Grammar Checker and Writing App. It's free. Your writing skills are terrible, so please use it.
Cloning system in another world
Uphar
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Hello, reading_system l didn't mean to disappoint you and make an excuse why didn't l edit the synopsis, l wanted to write in my words and improve my mistakes, but l realized that l ignore small but majors mistakes, which cause readers to deceive against my book, l past your synopsis which you send me months ago l wish it could generate positive impact towards my book, l hope that you continue to the book in future.
TheWorthyOne:he didint even edit it. I mean he could have at least took the one i recomended him or actually used a software like grammarly or prowriting aid, but no he didint.
Your Sypnosis is also terrible. If somebody reads it he wont even bother to read the novel. Heres a better one: Xzson was an average 12-year-old student. Unfortunately, he was bullied by other students in school for their enjoyment. One day after returning from school, he encountered his classmates, who beat him up so badly that he lost consciousness. After he lost consciousness, everyone ran away out of fear. After he opens his eyes he finds himself in another world in which a system is asking him whether he wants to activate the cloning system which can make a clone of anybody and make him control their clone's body and mind Hello everyone this is my first time writing a novel if I made any spelling mistakes please there ignore those and I will try to do better in future chapters.
Uphar:Ohh!. Thank you for your opinion. I will download it and try to improve the quality.
That’s what i was going to write about the edited one. He didn’t even put Maj. Wont read something where author dont care about his book.
TheWorthyOne:Your Sypnosis is also terrible. If somebody reads it he wont even bother to read the novel. Heres a better one: Xzson was an average 12-year-old student. Unfortunately, he was bullied by other students in school for their enjoyment. One day after returning from school, he encountered his classmates, who beat him up so badly that he lost consciousness. After he lost consciousness, everyone ran away out of fear. After he opens his eyes he finds himself in another world in which a system is asking him whether he wants to activate the cloning system which can make a clone of anybody and make him control their clone's body and mind Hello everyone this is my first time writing a novel if I made any spelling mistakes please there ignore those and I will try to do better in future chapters.
he didint even edit it. I mean he could have at least took the one i recomended him or actually used a software like grammarly or prowriting aid, but no he didint.
Crycks:That’s what i was going to write about the edited one. He didn’t even put Maj. Wont read something where author dont care about his book.
TheWorthyOne:he didint even edit it. I mean he could have at least took the one i recomended him or actually used a software like grammarly or prowriting aid, but no he didint.
My apologies cracks for causing you a problem, l added majors in the synopsis and chapters, and I hope that you would continue to read my book in the future.
Crycks:That’s what i was going to write about the edited one. He didn’t even put Maj. Wont read something where author dont care about his book.
now find an editor for your whole novel ahah 🤓 and i dont read novel where mc is the narrator if its not perfectly written so i wont come back. But i tried
Uphar:Ohh!. Thank you for your opinion. I will download it and try to improve the quality.
