Review Detail of XanaTrygg in My Dark Isekai Project

Hi! Well, story goes on quite fast, but that's something I appreciate, to be honest. I did see some grammatical errors, and perhaps enhancing and replacing the punctuation marks would be great for pacing at the moment of reading! The world building is quite nice, and I like that the story is quite dark (people die here, guys, be aware!! hahaha). If you are into Isekai genre, do check this one out!!