Review Detail of jaymanifesto in Moondust: the moment of tangency

This book is somewhat relatable in terms of character design. Upon reading the synopsis, I can’t help but picture a shy, self-conscious girl who has a lot of issues to confront within herself. Overall, the writing style is good. I don’t have much to say about how this story will play out since it’s full of mysteries as a story, and we have yet to learn more about Alexia. However, if I were to be honest I find the trope of the MC a bit….overrated. I’ve seen many of the “socially anxious female MC” in certain medias and my advice is to add a bit of elements that could make your story stand out more. Try mentioning a short backstory of how she turned out to be friendless and introverted in the synopsis, since your synopsis will basically be the “first impression” people will notice about your story. Overall, that is my only complaint. I love the Edgar Allan Poe passage in the beginning, it gives me a vibe of a mysterious, angsty indie RPG game where MC has a lot of secrets to uncover. Keep pushing, author!