The story isn't bad but I'm 8 chapters in still no sign of any chat group. A day of school alone took like 7 chapters and the chapters are long like 4kish words. The grammar is good, characters are decent but the snail as* pace kills it all for me. I won't tell you to not read it but you have been warned.
OVERLOAD69
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COMMEchapters are 1.5 k words each, it isn't that slow since you getting introduced to his daily life and who he interacts with, which can't be Sumed up in a chapter or two given I need to set a good base for the mc's personality, I won't argue about it being slow since I know it is slow paced because this is how he lives day to day.
no te preocupes, al ritmo que vas. podrás desarrollar muy bien tu historia, a mi me ha gustado. no todo tiene que ir a un ritmo apresurado.
OVERLOAD69:chapters are 1.5 k words each, it isn't that slow since you getting introduced to his daily life and who he interacts with, which can't be Sumed up in a chapter or two given I need to set a good base for the mc's personality, I won't argue about it being slow since I know it is slow paced because this is how he lives day to day.
Leylin_123:no te preocupes, al ritmo que vas. podrás desarrollar muy bien tu historia, a mi me ha gustado. no todo tiene que ir a un ritmo apresurado.