Quite an interesting piece I must say, even though there aren't much chapters yet. Some problems with grammar and punctuation but aside from that the novel is great. And I'm sure it'll get better as the story progresses. Keep pushing author, I hope your book gets contracted soon
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Liked it!
COMMEYou're welcome. And Happy Valentine wishes to you too... even though it's kinda too late now😅. I'm sure your book will get better just keep pushing you'll get there, I'll be rooting for you [img=strong][img=recommend]🙌
AbiAni_Ani_0891:Thank you so much for your review. After writing the story without checking by mistakenly I was posted. I also got so upset by my work. once again I thank you for your suggestion about the mistakes. Happy valentine day wishes....