The character introductions are perfect, the world is built clearly enough for your imagination to fill in the little details, the writing quality is good and so is the update stability. However, the protagonist is an idiot. Or a muscle-brain to be specific. Whether the author wrote him that way on purpose or by accident it certainly comes out that way. His cheat lets him copy a talent mark from another person every 24 hours and for months he worked at a martial arts training facility yet he only copied a handful of talents, it's stupid to think he only copied talents that interested him. If you could obtain a skill someone honed from years of blood, sweat, and tears in a single moment wouldn't you take it? This is a case where more is better and quality doesn't matter that's how powerful this cheat is even with a cooldown of a day. It's severely underutilized. Of course you could argue that that would make him too overpowered but then what was the point of giving him such a broken cheat in the first place? I really hope he gets some brains in the future or at some braincells at least.
Mr_Palados
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COMMEWell, I guess you're right. But I'd argue against a 1 star rating. It would be more of a 3 star, the writing quality, update stability, and world background were all great it was just the character and story development that I wasn't a fan of. I won't go and change my review because of it but thank you for pointing my mistake out.
reqrwq2:Why give it a 5 star instead of 1 star? Trash like you are the reason I dont trust web novel rating. A stupid MC who can copy a talent every day, forget to copy talents for 6 months. After reading chapter 8 and 9 you still gave it 5 star? Your brain is just trash that can not comprehend logic