Review Detail of SDIVAD in Obtained Yamamoto Genryusai template after joining the Straw Hats

It’s an overall good story idea The idea is nice and the way it’s played out isn’t terrible but the English is really off putting. It’s not terrible, I’ve seen much worse, it’s readable albeit with a headache. Again I don’t want to offend the author because I actually enjoyed the idea of the story (I read 7 chapters before I gave up) but it’s not that great maybe some people can power through but I can’t Keep up the work and maybe you get better at writing