Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Highschool Of The Dead (HOTD): The Reincarnate

Item: Highschool Of The Dead (HOTD): The Reincarnate
Rating: 4.2

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Initial Evaluation: Great Potential. (Ch.6) Lessen the info dump a bit (I know it helps you add words to it but too much of it will lessen readers enthusiasm).

Highschool Of The Dead (HOTD): The Reincarnate

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Thank you for the tip. I know that too much info gets boring but I need to input it as I’m new to writing. So if I write somthing and it doesn’t make sense I will explain it in either an A/N or in the story.

1yr

Lackada1sicalLv4Lackada1sical

no worries bout it, keep up the good work ;) I'll post criticism as much as I can to help ya out ;)

1yr