not bad so far. grammar is ok, so that's a plus, but we do seem to have a cliche moment a female is pyshed into the story. just seems like a nieve kids raised by robots. works have been great until the author forced the girl into it and he didn't even turn in the criminal for bounty or sell the ship...
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