Review Detail of Dande_lion in Reincarnated in Fate/kaleid as Shirou Emiya

I am enjoying this story quite a bit. It can definitly be considered a better rendition of the first version. The most apparent improvement is the clearer Story structure and the reduction of the inclusion of the not so random omnipotent beings, ROB, Truck-chan and co. I am of the opinion that they disturbed or rather interrupted the flow of the story and had a negativ effect on the immersion because of ther rather nonsensical behaviour. I also greatly appreciate the "misterious" backstory of the MC, its definetly a breath of fresh air when it comes to Reincarnation Stories. So, yeah, definetly 4 Stars at least. Cant wait for more Chapters and keep up the good work.