Review Detail of _Dream_God_ in I've Become A Lewd Dragon

Ugh author self review Writing quality: brah I'm not good at writing Story development: I only have 2 chapters so far but I think I'm doing good with showing instead of telling Character design. I feel like I did a good job introducing the first to women. I know the mc is mediocre but the story is more about his confidence. also he's 3 as of chapter 2 Update stability: ok for this one I have to be honest. this might not be great. with my adhd I'm likely to have a lot of chapters in a short time or no chapters for a while. be warned World background: this one is really hard. try not info dumping people when you've come up with a very interesting world. but I will try my best to avoid this one. it's also the reason I didn't chose to make a system novel.