Review Detail of Zaccharus in Eye of Aragos: The Darkness comes

First of all - hats off to your consistency and hard work. The fact that you released so many chapters prove your commitment to your story, which really inspires me a lot. While I was reading your story, I could feel the passion and care that you put into it. The demonic style of the main character while fighting was amazing to read. The plot progression is great, and the scenes are all well thought out. I personally feel that you could describe things in a better manner. For instance, while describing the main character's body, instead of him saying that he had six-pack abs, you could have used a narrator to convey the same, because it just felt weird for a person to say, 'I have muscles in the right place'. Just my opinion. All in all, this was a wonderful read and it excites me in more ways than one :). I feel that this story will work very well in an animated medium, so I hope that it gets an animation too. Keep up the great work! Cheers!