Review Detail of Firelorn_P_King in 900 DAYS: Trapped Within Chapters

I really enjoyed the very beginning of the story, it really pulled me in especially with the conversation with a fantasmal creature such as a pixie. For most, they would just rush into the exciting parts of the story but this makes you get used to the main character, expressing a little bit of who she is, and where she's going. I love the background setting as well as the character development. Though, there may be a bit of grammatical errors, It's a good story that has a lot potential if you take your time to enjoy it.