Review Detail of Gavyn_Mack in Universe Maker

overall the concept is fine, but the writing quality isn't good. there are spelling mistakes and words that are missing a letter, but most of all, it's hard to understand things, not because I don't understand what the words mean, but because of how it's phrased so it gets confusing..... and I can see this even though I'm only at chapter 4. Now if the writing quality does improve in later chapters author, could you at least go back and improve the early chapters, all of this make it difficult to continue reading. Now in the end, this is just my opinion,but hopefully you read this author and understand where I'm coming from. no hard feelings 😅