Review Detail of Winter_Whisperer in Starting the Multiverse journey from SAO

Honestly an amazing premise. Just ruined by the kayaba one. In an SAO fic, I would expect the MC to undergo the dangers. Cause it doesn't feel genuine otherwise. The characters also feel a bit 2 dimensional to me. But I like the use of subsystems just not the way it was executed. I may or may not come back to this novel. I'll Wait and see till it has some more chapters.