Review Detail of 3PoundsOfRice in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

I don't remember if I already wrote a review, in any case, if I did it was a long time ago. I think that after 250 chapters I must highlight the positive and negative points of this magnificent story. Let's start with the good. The quality of the writing is simply perfect. The interactions feel very real and the author uses the perfect words for each character. No character from the original work or an OC says something they wouldn't say according to their personality or according to the description we were given about them in the story. Kishimoto failed to explain in detail the jutsu system and chakra control. And this author solves it solely based on data provided during the original work, without inventing anything, just filling in the gaps. The fight scenes. I'm completely serious, but I've never seen such complete fight scenes. When the mc is in danger you can literally feel it as a reader. And the fights are so well described you can picture them in your mind. MC makes use of all his skills to survive, and he doesn't use anything he hasn't learned before. He doesn't get a power up to save his ass. Now let's talk about Takuma. I'd say it's well written, it's kind of complex to explain. He has character, determination, he has his pride and a "noble" heart. Something that remains constant, what I mean is that the author understands how his MC is, and does not make him act inconsistently with himself, he does not present contradictions. And his background has not yet been fully revealed. And his abilities, you can literally feel every step he takes to become strong. It's exciting to see him earn his strength through sacrifice and every skill he learns is important to build him as a shinobi. And of course he will use it to preserve his life. Every time I see him fight I think "Oh, I remember when he learned that". And if we talk about the MC, we have to talk about the OCs. There are quite a few of them, and regardless of their screen time, each one of them is superbly built, there is not one that is exactly the same as the other. Especially his friends and particularly Nenro. And this from someone who hates OCs. But now it's time for the bad. In particular there are only 2 that I don't like one bit and one that although I don't particularly like it, I can understand why you did it. I don't understand why you made Konoha look like the United States in terms of its terrible drug control. Our politicians seem to be trying to increase this problem instead of solving it. And while it is understandable that some shinobi look for a way to obtain wealth through organized crime, it is not understandable that the higher ups do nothing to prevent it. On the other hand, that is somewhat explained by infiltrating Danzo into the matter, so good job. Now, the jutsu system. I understand that jutsu are valuable and it is problematic if someone were to leak them. But what is happening with Takuma is simply a punishment. I may not have a Jonnin Sensei, but that doesn't seem like a good enough reason for jutsu to be so hard to get (on the other hand, it's better than what other authors do. They just go to the library and find C-class jutsu, haha ). Think about it, it's as if a modern army doesn't want to give the best weapons to its elite soldiers. And finally, Takuma's slow development. Yes, it's very slow, although you did it very well. Considering that he hasn't completed 4 years in that world and is already above most Chunin, it seems like decent progress to me. The main problem is that every time Takuma fights other gennin or chunin he encounters a challenge (at least with the Konoha ones). I'm just saying it's not fun when Takuma fights against his ordinary classmates and ends up getting injured in a fight which clearly should have won easily. And that's all, thank you for all the chapters, it shows the effort you put into it. I will try to join your patreon whenever my finances allow me.