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I personally think this novel has great potential; I suggest you write more within the chapters. Maybe you could put more detail in the characters' family. However, I look forward to continuing reading this novel. I highly recommend this.

The secrets among the stars

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I've stopped writing this novel however, I will continue and update the story. Thanks for the advice and compliments!