Review Detail of BrazilianGoodGuy in God’s Domain: Returning to Take It All

Very good story, the pace is somehow better than RSSG (although they haven't found a real challenge yet), the characters are nice, I felt that the author got too attached to the original work which brings this work closer to a Fanfic than an Original Work, I expected to see more differentiation in terms of items and future directions than can happen but the author stopped writing (I hope he returns from the bottom of my heart)